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PostSubject: [DONE] Takeshi Hoshito   Wed Jul 22, 2015 7:16 pm

Personal Information

First & Last Name: Takeshi Hoshito
Age: 16
Eye color: Blue/Red
Hair color: Black
Weight & Height: 64kg 169cm

Appearance & Clothing: Takeshi is around average height and has a muscular lean body. He has a sharp face with wild spiky black hair and dark blue eyes. He has light skin on the border of pale with multiple scars across his arms. Takeshi  has one main outfit, mainly for blending in and combat. This  attire consist of a full length black trench coat with a notch laper and hood. The coat is slightly tattered at the bottom . Underneath he wears a black scarf around his neck with a dark red sleeveless Chinese style shirt with a straight collar and black highlights. Along with this he wears skinny black martial arts pants with black combat boots.

Special features: When feeling any emotion very strongly his Takashi's eyes will turn red and his voice will get slightly deeper to wear it's not significant but noticeable.


Origin and family

Origin: Takeshi is from the country of Jappon. He is the younger of two kids and comes from a long line of ninja who specialize in the art of herbs  . Not many people even in his own country know of his family as their secrets have been kept inside the family.

Family & close People: Father- Araiyma Hoshito
Current head of the Hoshito clan and a person completely devoid of emotion. Despite being void of emotion he does care about his family but mainly presses his views on to them not allowing any room for their own thoughts or opinions. Such as the harsh training and studying they must endure from a young age. Despite this he in the end wants his kids to use their skills in anyway that would bring  prestige to their family.Age-54

Mother- Hirami Hoshito
Mother of Takeshi she provided the love and emotional support for the her kids making up for her husband. She herself came from a normal family and was emerged in to the ninja life when marrying. She died soon after Takeshi turned ten. Age-53

Older Sister- Megumi Hoshito
The older of the two siblings Megumi was a role model to Takeshi. Being of age she was allowed to leave but stayed longer and helped tutor her brother. She became Takeshi's main emotional support after their mother died and did her best to try and keep him happy.By one way was tp make his training more fun. After Takashi became stable she left of on her own. Age- 22

       
Personality

Personality & Behaviour: Takeshi is a easy-going guy who has multiple moods depending on the situation. He can go from laid-back to over joyed and excited even annoyed or completely silent and anti-social. When he is feeling annoyed or even sad his temper can rise very easy but despite this he trys not to blow it off all at once. He might just show annoyance in his tone or go off and destroy stuff. Another side effect from his depression to keep himself from getting sad. A noticeable behavior is that Takeshi is always cracking his knuckles when he is bored.

Strengths & Weaknesses: \Depression: Takeshi's emotions are his weak point. Certain points if the stress is too much he could emotionally breakdown in tears. His depression causes him to build up massive amounts of anger. The pent up anger clouds his judgement and can make him go blind with rage in battle.

Heart: The very foundation of Takeshi is the love for his sister and mother. That love and the pain of depression shaped him as a person. It gives him strengh, pride, ad determination to struggle on until the end. It also makes him a generally kind person to everyone. The heart is his center, hiss will, and it's what holds everything truly important to him.

Erotophiliac: Takeshi's depression was generated from the death of his mother and so he missed her love. So if he tends to fall for girls somewhat easily because it replaces that love. Although he falls in love easily he will be loyal to that one person and try to get only them to fall for him unless she shows disinterest.

Herbology: From Takeshi's studying for a maority of his life he has vast knowledge of many medical and poisonous herbs. He can correctly prepare them and use as necessary.

Goals: Takeshi's main goal to is to become a successful hunter and become extremely strong. He then wants to use the privileges of a hunter to help people and even countries doing a assortment of task and jobs. Be it assassinations to earning money to save or village. Even rescue and anti-terrorist work. As long as he can make the world a better place with his own hands. While also having a little fun along the way.


History
Takeshi grew up in in the outskirts of a city called Tokyo in Jappon. From the moment he was able to walk he started his steps to ruthless training. His father head of the clan only survivor made it a priority to beat his ways in to his kids. It first began with a mix of tactical and physical training.That began at age seven after  basic physical training. He would be sent in to the woods with only a knife for months at a time. This was to help him learn how to hide his presence and then be able to quickly strike and kill the target.This also help him to get   It was the foundation for all his teachings to come.

Life out in the woods at first was very difficult. Takashi only ever went under physical training never mental. The first few weeks were horrible as he nearly starved to death. Unable to successfully hunt he was stuck with trying random berries and herbs. It was a living hell as he had to experiment with most which gave him rashes, headaches, and various other symptoms. It put fear in to Takeshi as he began to get desperate. But that desperation, that will to live, is what made him. Takeshi came across a large buck and stalked it perfectly and quickly killed it with his knife. He skinned it alive and feasted and from then on improved his hunting skill. After his first few endeavors in the woods he became more and more accustomed with it. Soon not only was he a excellent hunter but a master of herbs. Being able to identify identical plants and shrooms alike with ease.

Three years later at age ten his mother died. She went along with Takeshi and was mauled by a bear as they were collecting herbs. In anger he charged the bear and slaughtered it suffering multiple wounds leading to scars all across his body. Soon after he fell in to depression becoming devoid of life and emotion as he continued with his training.This is the point in his life when his sister began to provide emotional support for Takeshi. She began to supervise a portion of his training making it fun for him as well as helping him cope with their mothers' death. Through his sister and father he learned the way of the sword.

A few years later at age fifteen Takeshi creates his new outfit and is prepared to leave home as his sister once did a few years ago.  His goal to become a hunter and help the wold become a better place not only that but experience the world and simply enjoy his life. He visited his mother's grave before setting off in to the world he knew little about. Takeshi spent the majority of his time traveling Yorbian continent.New to the outside world he spent his time learning about the world. An entire year later Takeshi is in YorkNew city to make a name for himself and prepare for the hunters  exam.


Character Image

(Says new members can't post links, and it won't let me send with the pic)

Avatar origin: Sasuke from Naruto

Writing Sample
Takeshi made his way down the streets of YorkNew city thinking of his next move. He had just recently arrived to the city by airship. Ever since he's just been checking out everything. All the interestings things he heard about so far were the Heavens Arena and nothing more."New city and yet absolutely nothing for me to do." Takashi sighed as someone pushed past him running off with a purse.

"Well alright then!"He yelled putting his hood and scarf on running after the guy as he turned in to a alley. Takashi acrobatically started climbing up the buildings tailing the guy from above. He continued to follow the guy as he kept turning corners until he blended in on the next street.Shame he can't out run a ninja, I guess i'll keep following him he seems to be heading somewhere,Takashi thought to himself.

After around ten more minutes of tailing Takashi followed the crook in to a abandon warehouse near the docks. He watched as he entered the building and he himself quickly scaled the warehouse and looked down from the roof window. Takashi scanned the room to find three people. The guy with the purse, a tall muscular guy with a shaved head,and a skinny guy in a sleeveless jacket.

Now was the time to strike Takashi thought before he felt a chilling presence. The feeling itself was suffocating as if tendrils of darkness wrapped around him as he waited for death. Completely frozen in fear he watched as the three men below all froze as well before being mysteriously cut down. They slumped to the ground and before he knew it Takashi could move again. With that he was out.


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PostSubject: Re: [DONE] Takeshi Hoshito   Thu Jul 23, 2015 10:53 pm

Character Stats

Health - 100
Aura - 100
Usable Aura - 10
Strength - 10
Precision - 10
Resilience - 10
Speed - 10

Nen

Native Nen: Conjurer
Nen Theme: Seven Swords of Sin

Nen-Points purchased: 0

Enhancer: Rank 0
Transmuter: Rank 0
Conjurer: Rank 1
Specialist: Rank 0
Manipulator: Rank 0
Emitter: Rank 0

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PostSubject: Re: [DONE] Takeshi Hoshito   Fri Jul 24, 2015 10:24 am

when this is done please remember to change the prefix so the staff knows
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PostSubject: Re: [DONE] Takeshi Hoshito   Fri Jul 24, 2015 11:39 pm

please expand on your character's history the minimum is 500 words.
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PostSubject: Re: [DONE] Takeshi Hoshito   Tue Jul 28, 2015 6:32 pm

Needs some minor cleanup for things like
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This also help him to get   It was the foundation for all his teachings to come.
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quickly killed it with his knife. He skinned it alive
where editing apparently left some bumps.

History should be toned down / allocated more sensibly. For ages 7 to 10, being able to survive for months, hunt and process animals with just a knife is a little bit overdramatic. Especially seeing how you are pretty much just starting your adventure at the end of the story / start of roleplay. Simply spreading these events out a little would already do, since he's 16 there is a lot of room to move elements around.

Also, images should work, did for everyone else so far and you had one in the first edition of the Application. Use the
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tag with a valid image link and it should work. If not, you are likely hotlinking (e.G. from wikis or boorus) and should upload your image to Imgur (or any other imagehost of your choice) to use it.
If all that does not work, reach either of us on chat, skype, personal message etc. and we'll work it out.

Lastly, reply back after making changes please, so we'll know when to check and evaluate.


Edit: Also your Nen Theme requires more than just a name. Please add a short description of what "Seven Swords of Sin" means.
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PostSubject: Re: [DONE] Takeshi Hoshito   Mon Aug 31, 2015 10:29 am

Nothing happening here either, if you end up coming back, you can always do the same character again. Denied.
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