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PostSubject: [Enhancer] Holy Grail - Nen   Sun Jul 12, 2015 11:21 pm

Holy Grail

Theme: Storage
Type: Enhancer

Description: The user has the ability to move their Aura into another pool much like when you move water from one pool to another. Both of those pools have different valves the valve of the original first pool has a limited valve that only lets out a little bit of aura into the second pool the maximum amount equaling the users usable aura amount. Whilst the second pool has a infinately large valve but a limited amount to store the amount capable of being stored is 50% of the users maximum aura. The user can then draw upon the stored power to either enhance his attributes or create devastating attacks.

However moving the Aura between the pools does not trigger the 90% return of aura since that would let the user gain more aura than they are capable of having and only when they use the aura that is being stored in the second pool do they get the 90% return of aura effect.




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PostSubject: Re: [Enhancer] Holy Grail - Nen   Sun Jul 12, 2015 11:36 pm

First of please run this through some form of spell check. Next:

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the original first pool has a limited valve that only lets out a little bit of aura into the second pool(The maximum amount capable of being transfered per post is the users amount of usable aura)

Thats already covered by the rules...

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(the amount capable of being stored being 50% of the users base of aura)

This is a nightmare to understand, try something like: "The amount, that may be stored, is equal to 50% of the users maximum Aura." and make it a sentence instead of just a note in brackets.

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his/her

Since this is your Nen and only your's you do not need to do this.

Lastly please check again for some grammar and end your sentences with propper punctuation, instead of using commas.
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PostSubject: Re: [Enhancer] Holy Grail - Nen   Mon Jul 13, 2015 12:00 am

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Both of those pools have different valves the valve of the original first pool has a limited valve that only lets out a little bit of aura into the second pool.

how much?

Also what about the 90% of used Aura that is returned after each use?
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PostSubject: Re: [Enhancer] Holy Grail - Nen   Mon Jul 13, 2015 12:24 am

Clear enough. Approved!
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