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PostSubject: [DONE] Solomon   Sat Jul 11, 2015 11:41 am

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First & Last Name: Solomon Elijah Charlatarion
Age:  22
Eye color:  gold shining eyes.
Hair color:  Blond
Weight & Height: 79kg, 188cm

Appearance & Clothing: Solomon is a semi tall man with a strong posture and fair skin, his hair color is blond and his hair is fairly long but is mostly pushed around by the use of wax or gel so that it gets a very rough, spiky yet lean look, he has a fairly average small nose, long eyebrows that are fairly average in their width, his mouth has no over or under bite, he has average small ears and a slightly spiked and rounded chin.

He has a ectomorph type body and is pretty lean but trains to stay healthy and fit making him a slim not so very muscular type of man with light muscle definition.

He most oftenly wears a white shirt, a black tie, a black vest with white stripes and suit pants that match the vest, a pair of gentlemans shoes and over it all a cape that is black with vine red linings and a wine red inside that holds together with the help of a gold chain with coins and his royal family's symbols tying it all together.

Special features: Always wears his cape, gold shining eyes.


Origin and family

Origin: Solomon is the youngest child of the Royal Charlatarion family a noble family that has its hands in controlling the country of Skishima that is situated beneath the country of Ochima on the map and is situated on the lower part of the continent beneath the Azian continent, its a country known not for its military strength but for its alliances and strong diplomacy.

The country has a high amount of gold that it uses as resource for trade and creating fine jewlery known world wide, His parents are the King and Queen of the country.


Family & close People: Father - Abiel David Charlatarion
A man of great political stature, loves politics and has teached all of his sons how to adress people when in a political chamber and how to convince them that what you want is the right thing for the world, is very charismatic and is loved by his people, 65 years old.


Mother - Mary Joy Charlatarion
A extremely beautiful woman that seems to never age in her physical form but only in her mind where she grows ever older, is at the age of 56 and loves to drink tea whilst listening to the birds sing every morning as her husband talks politics away from home.


Oldest brother - Abaddon Abel Charlatarion
A mean bean older brother that has not done much but pester Solomon throughout his years, is "destined" to become the king of the country of Skishima and because of it is treated like a god by the maids around the castle, never leaves the castle and is fairly spoiled, Age 29.


Second oldest brother - Bethuel Cain Charlatarion
Bethuel is the jealous second brother and often opposes Abaddon and however much he treats people ill because of his jealousy is a very kind man and often when Abaddon does not see feeds birds and poor people alike, has left the castle many many times to wander the streets and buy things from shops.
gives money to people not knowing that he spills riches on them enough to let them never work again and is therefore known to have a limited amount of money left in his share of the royal expenses, Age 25.




Personality

Personality & Behaviour:  Solomon is a man with a weird type of personality, he is very open about his  feelings and deals with things at his own rate which is either very quickly or very slowly depending on the personal importance of the matter, he is a astounding diplomat but has never set his feet on the scene of diplomacy and politics instead he likes dealing and controling underground criminal activities and companies alike, a behaviour that his father most dislikes but does not have a strong enough will to deal with more then cover them up and because of that the rest of the family and the public does not know about it.

Recently Solomon has taken travelling to become one of his hobbies aside from what he travels to do(more criminal things) he often visits cities like Yorknew, Zaban, Dolle and Peijin in the dictatorship republic of east gorteau.


Strengths & Weaknesses: Solomon grew up being teached politics by his king father and other things like math in school by the royal academy.

He is a master of words and has away with controlling criminals through blackmail and extortion, he has been teached basic martial arts by different dojo masters and knows how to balance himself and use stances in combat however he is no master and has shown to have several flaws in his movements as he most oftenly goes for a straight forward approach whilst in combat.

Because of his goal of becoming the strongest he often overlooks those that to him seems weaker than him not noting if they are actually harmfull to him this leads to him being snook up upon being very easy.



Goals: Solomons goals are to live ontop of the pyramids of both politics and standards, because he strives to live ontop of the social pyramids he intends to become the strongest there is through any means necessary and as much as he wants to become the strongest he also wants to further strong kin not only like his father did him in politics but also in the arts of war and martial arts, therefore he wants to find a woman to love and cherish but also one that will further the perfect genes much like his royal bloodline has done to him.



History

Solomon was born in his baby chamber in the palace, being squeezed out by his mother on a large bed with the best doctors from all around the world helping her with the procedure.
What was different with Solomon and his older brothers was that he was born with golden shining eyes, because of this the doctors were shocked and his father hired a doctor from the hunter association to inspect young Solomon and what the doctor found out was that Solomon had a unnatural amount of Aura and that it almost looked as if a stream of golden light of aura trailed down from the ceiling and sky to the boys eyes as if whatever god existed had given its blessings upon the young boy.

He told Solomons father this behind closed doors so that no one would know except for Abiel and of course Solomon later in life.

Solomon would grow up a healthy young boy and even though he often lacked the basic attention that most fathers give their children instead getting his mothers attention and the maids he loved playing around in the castle orchard and in the castle halls, he was continuously mocked and bullied by his oldest brother Abaddon which made him grow to dislike him but he had one brother that he liked and that was Bethuel, Solomon and Bethuel were always helping each other and always looked out for each other even in their early school years would they look to help each other.
In high school Solomon had learned all of the politics he needed from his father to manipulate the student council of his school, the student council being something like the ones in control of student activities and order became Solomons playdogs and he drifted through high school easily without ever being cornered by anyone.

It was also during this time and a few years earlier that Solomon had started doing martial arts which pushed him to joining the schools martial arts club even though he was being given professional training at home and even though he tried he could not best those that was at the peak of their training in the club this also lead to him not winning the Junior martial arts championships in Skishima instead he would place 4th.

He then advanced to university where he studied politics even though he knew a lot about it already, he would this once study hard and try his utmost to learn all that was given during school time, working his way through every bit of homework and every test so that he while smiling could graduate from the school feeling all the sorrowful yet happy feelings that you do when you leave your comrades behind to take a new step forward in life.

After graduation Solomon grew bored of and did not know what to do so he travelled for a while pushing the mafia so that the leaders would forget about him, he then came across the idea of becoming the strongest ever so that he could rule over all the mafia and what not organizations, he wanted to have fun and go on a adventure afterall.





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John walked around the streets of the village of clover, known by some as the city of love, he was bored from the lack of tournaments and things to do and had been ever since the horrific murder that had been witnessed in the market area of the town.

Walking around the lower market John happened upon a poster sitting on a pillar in a more remote part of the market, the poster was describing a pound for pound MMA style tournament and the sign up for the fight was free, John smiled to himself, the motives behind why the sign up fee was for free was unknown to him but he loved tournaments and even though he did not like to harm people out of unnecessary reasons this would be a good chance for him to train his own combat experience so that ranking up in the council would be easier, see he had heard about people being tested for their ranking up by a knight of a higher rank and so he would need to become stronger to be able to clear those trials.

He would grab the poster and then with a gentle yet fierce motion he ripped it from its holdings and smiled as he folded it together and placed it in his right pocket and then patting the pocket as if it was a pregnant womans stomach.

He made his way back too the hotel where he showered and rested trying his utmost to keep track of the time as he did so, he would dress himself again wearing his dark blue and gold rimmed coat and normal clothing that he most always wore afterall it was his favorite set and it consisted of a white fine shirt with a handkarchief placed in the collar hanging from it making it seem like a real admirals clothing, he also wore dark blue set of Corduroys and ended his clotes set in a pair of gentlemans shoes, none of his clothes were fit for fighting but such a thing did not matter much to him.


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PostSubject: Re: [DONE] Solomon   Sat Jul 11, 2015 11:41 am

Character Stats

Health - 100
Aura - 100
Usable Aura - 10
Strength - 10
Precision - 10
Resilience - 10
Speed - 10

Nen

Native Nen: Enhancer
Nen Theme:  "Storage" - The user is able to store their Aura in a second form of Aura pool for them to use at a later time.
Nen-Points purchased: 0

Enhancer: Rank 1
Transmuter: Rank 0
Conjurer: Rank 0
Specialist: Rank 0
Manipulator: Rank 0
Emitter: Rank 0

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PostSubject: Re: [DONE] Solomon   Sun Jul 12, 2015 4:49 pm

1st Sheet critic:

- You have no weaknesses. Sorry but your character may not be perfect.

Quote :
Special features: Golden shining eyes because of his Nen type and theme.

- I see no connection between your Nen Type or Theme and your eyes

Quote :
He then advanced to university

- Your character is too young for this and if he was not, what did he do there other than blackmail people?

Minor critic:

- Please look out to end your sentences before the end of each paragraph, in the future.


2nd Sheet critic:

Quote :
"Insignia" - The user can with the help of a small created Insignia for brief moments do things like multiply jumping speed, physical strength etc (this is only for things like a single punch being thrown or a dodge being made etc.”

- To create something you would have to pick conjurer.
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PostSubject: Re: [DONE] Solomon   Sun Jul 12, 2015 6:35 pm

Fixed the Nen theme and weakness also tweaked the whole paragraph thing a little dont know if you will like it tho XD also I removed the whole

Quote :
Special features: Golden shining eyes because of his Nen type and theme.

Thing and fixed with the university and ages of his brothers.

Oldest brother - Abaddon Abel Charlatarion
A mean bean older brother that has not done much but pester Solomon throughout his years, is "destined" to become the king of the country of Skishima and because of it is treated like a god by the maids around the castle, never leaves the castle and is fairly spoiled, Age 25.


Second oldest brother - Bethuel Cain Charlatarion
Bethuel is the jealous second brother and often opposes Abaddon and however much he treats people ill because of his jealousy is a very kind man and often when Abaddon does not see feeds birds and poor people alike, has left the castle many many times to wander the streets and buy things from shops, gives money to people not knowing that he spills riches on them enough to let them never work again and is therefore known to have a limited amount of money left in his share of the royal expenses, Age 22.

Oldest brother - Abaddon Abel Charlatarion
A mean bean older brother that has not done much but pester Solomon throughout his years, is "destined" to become the king of the country of Skishima and because of it is treated like a god by the maids around the castle, never leaves the castle and is fairly spoiled, Age 29.


Second oldest brother - Bethuel Cain Charlatarion
Bethuel is the jealous second brother and often opposes Abaddon and however much he treats people ill because of his jealousy is a very kind man and often when Abaddon does not see feeds birds and poor people alike, has left the castle many many times to wander the streets and buy things from shops.
gives money to people not knowing that he spills riches on them enough to let them never work again and is therefore known to have a limited amount of money left in his share of the royal expenses, Age 25.

and the nen fixes.

Native Nen: Enhancer
Nen Theme: "Insignia" - The user can with the help of a small created Insignia for brief moments do things like multiply jumping speed, physical strength etc (this is only for things like a single punch being thrown or a dodge being made etc.

Native Nen: Enhancer
Nen Theme: "Thermos" - The user is able to store Aura in his eyes so that he can release it in one instance at a later time much like you do when you open a container of sorts, this allows the user to release alot of Aura at the same time that the user can use for deadly techniques (note that this does not allow the user to more than double the attribute they put aura into just like the rules say.)

and then the weakness thing.

Because of his goal of becoming the strongest he often overlooks those that to him seems weaker than him not noting if they are actually harmfull to him this leads to him being snook up upon being very easy.


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PostSubject: Re: [DONE] Solomon   Sun Jul 12, 2015 6:42 pm

Removed the in his eyes part since that simply feels silly and cliché


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PostSubject: Re: [DONE] Solomon   Sun Jul 12, 2015 6:52 pm

Since this is more official and important for your limitations your Theme's gramatic should be accurate. I won't complain about all the other mistakes.

Quote :
Nen Theme: "Thermos" - The user is able to store Aura so that he can release it in one instance at a later time much like you do when you open a container of sorts, this allows the user to release alot of Aura at the same time that the user can use for deadly techniques (note that this does not allow the user to more than double the attribute they put aura into just like the rules say.)

To make this quick I suggest changing the description to this: "The user is able to store Aura, which he can release in an instant, at a later time, similar to opening a container."

Also as a note, this only includes Aura you start storing from the start of combat, you may not just walk around and pretend that you stored half your Aura in your eyes already. Lastly the exact amount of this and other rules concerning this will have to be worked out when you present your Nen in the Custom Skills Forum.

Well anyway other than that I have no complains anymore. If you agree with all this and made the last change to your theme's description, I can accept this character.
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PostSubject: Re: [DONE] Solomon   Sun Jul 12, 2015 8:22 pm

changed the theme name to Storage and reworked the text of the nen theme a bit.


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PostSubject: Re: [DONE] Solomon   Sun Jul 12, 2015 8:24 pm

Somewhat acceptable, congratulations! Repost in Character Sheets.

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[b][size=18][u]Personal Information[/u][/size][/b]

[b]First & Last Name:[/b] Solomon Elijah Charlatarion
[b]Age:[/b]  22
[b]Eye color:[/b]  gold shining eyes.
[b]Hair color:[/b]  Blond
[b]Weight & Height:[/b] 79kg, 188cm

[b]Appearance & Clothing:[/b] Solomon is a semi tall man with a strong posture and fair skin, his hair color is blond and his hair is fairly long but is mostly pushed around by the use of wax or gel so that it gets a very rough, spiky yet lean look, he has a fairly average small nose, long eyebrows that are fairly average in their width, his mouth has no over or under bite, he has average small ears and a slightly spiked and rounded chin.

He has a ectomorph type body and is pretty lean but trains to stay healthy and fit making him a slim not so very muscular type of man with light muscle definition.

He most oftenly wears a white shirt, a black tie, a black vest with white stripes and suit pants that match the vest, a pair of gentlemans shoes and over it all a cape that is black with vine red linings and a wine red inside that holds together with the help of a gold chain with coins and his royal family's symbols tying it all together.

[b]Special features:[/b] Always wears his cape, gold shining eyes.


[size=18][b][u]Origin and family[/u][/b][/size]

[b]Origin:[/b] Solomon is the youngest child of the Royal Charlatarion family a noble family that has its hands in controlling the country of Skishima that is situated beneath the country of Ochima on the map and is situated on the lower part of the continent beneath the Azian continent, its a country known not for its military strength but for its alliances and strong diplomacy.

The country has a high amount of gold that it uses as resource for trade and creating fine jewlery known world wide, His parents are the King and Queen of the country.


[b]Family & close People:[/b] Father - Abiel David Charlatarion
A man of great political stature, loves politics and has teached all of his sons how to adress people when in a political chamber and how to convince them that what you want is the right thing for the world, is very charismatic and is loved by his people, 65 years old.


Mother - Mary Joy Charlatarion
A extremely beautiful woman that seems to never age in her physical form but only in her mind where she grows ever older, is at the age of 56 and loves to drink tea whilst listening to the birds sing every morning as her husband talks politics away from home.


Oldest brother - Abaddon Abel Charlatarion
A mean bean older brother that has not done much but pester Solomon throughout his years, is "destined" to become the king of the country of Skishima and because of it is treated like a god by the maids around the castle, never leaves the castle and is fairly spoiled, Age 29.


Second oldest brother - Bethuel Cain Charlatarion
Bethuel is the jealous second brother and often opposes Abaddon and however much he treats people ill because of his jealousy is a very kind man and often when Abaddon does not see feeds birds and poor people alike, has left the castle many many times to wander the streets and buy things from shops.
gives money to people not knowing that he spills riches on them enough to let them never work again and is therefore known to have a limited amount of money left in his share of the royal expenses, Age 25.




[size=18][b][u]Personality[/u][/b][/size]

[b]Personality & Behaviour:[/b]  Solomon is a man with a weird type of personality, he is very open about his  feelings and deals with things at his own rate which is either very quickly or very slowly depending on the personal importance of the matter, he is a astounding diplomat but has never set his feet on the scene of diplomacy and politics instead he likes dealing and controling underground criminal activities and companies alike, a behaviour that his father most dislikes but does not have a strong enough will to deal with more then cover them up and because of that the rest of the family and the public does not know about it.

Recently Solomon has taken travelling to become one of his hobbies aside from what he travels to do(more criminal things) he often visits cities like Yorknew, Zaban, Dolle and Peijin in the dictatorship republic of east gorteau.


[b]Strengths & Weaknesses:[/b] Solomon grew up being teached politics by his king father and other things like math in school by the royal academy.

He is a master of words and has away with controlling criminals through blackmail and extortion, he has been teached basic martial arts by different dojo masters and knows how to balance himself and use stances in combat however he is no master and has shown to have several flaws in his movements as he most oftenly goes for a straight forward approach whilst in combat.

Because of his goal of becoming the strongest he often overlooks those that to him seems weaker than him not noting if they are actually harmfull to him this leads to him being snook up upon being very easy.



[b]Goals:[/b] Solomons goals are to live ontop of the pyramids of both politics and standards, because he strives to live ontop of the social pyramids he intends to become the strongest there is through any means necessary and as much as he wants to become the strongest he also wants to further strong kin not only like his father did him in politics but also in the arts of war and martial arts, therefore he wants to find a woman to love and cherish but also one that will further the perfect genes much like his royal bloodline has done to him.



[size=18][b][u]History[/u][/b][/size]

Solomon was born in his baby chamber in the palace, being squeezed out by his mother on a large bed with the best doctors from all around the world helping her with the procedure.
What was different with Solomon and his older brothers was that he was born with golden shining eyes, because of this the doctors were shocked and his father hired a doctor from the hunter association to inspect young Solomon and what the doctor found out was that Solomon had a unnatural amount of Aura and that it almost looked as if a stream of golden light of aura trailed down from the ceiling and sky to the boys eyes as if whatever god existed had given its blessings upon the young boy.

He told Solomons father this behind closed doors so that no one would know except for Abiel and of course Solomon later in life.

Solomon would grow up a healthy young boy and even though he often lacked the basic attention that most fathers give their children instead getting his mothers attention and the maids he loved playing around in the castle orchard and in the castle halls, he was continuously mocked and bullied by his oldest brother Abaddon which made him grow to dislike him but he had one brother that he liked and that was Bethuel, Solomon and Bethuel were always helping each other and always looked out for each other even in their early school years would they look to help each other.
In high school Solomon had learned all of the politics he needed from his father to manipulate the student council of his school, the student council being something like the ones in control of student activities and order became Solomons playdogs and he drifted through high school easily without ever being cornered by anyone.

It was also during this time and a few years earlier that Solomon had started doing martial arts which pushed him to joining the schools martial arts club even though he was being given professional training at home and even though he tried he could not best those that was at the peak of their training in the club this also lead to him not winning the Junior martial arts championships in Skishima instead he would place 4th.

He then advanced to university where he studied politics even though he knew a lot about it already, he would this once study hard and try his utmost to learn all that was given during school time, working his way through every bit of homework and every test so that he while smiling could graduate from the school feeling all the sorrowful yet happy feelings that you do when you leave your comrades behind to take a new step forward in life.

After graduation Solomon grew bored of and did not know what to do so he travelled for a while pushing the mafia so that the leaders would forget about him, he then came across the idea of becoming the strongest ever so that he could rule over all the mafia and what not organizations, he wanted to have fun and go on a adventure afterall.





[size=18][b][u]Character Image[/u][/b][/size]

[img]http://i.imgur.com/wSFKkZH.jpg[/img]


[i]Avatar origin[/i]: Giotto Vongola primo from katekyo hitman reborn

[size=18][b][u]Writing Sample[/u][/b][/size]

John walked around the streets of the village of clover, known by some as the city of love, he was bored from the lack of tournaments and things to do and had been ever since the horrific murder that had been witnessed in the market area of the town.

Walking around the lower market John happened upon a poster sitting on a pillar in a more remote part of the market, the poster was describing a pound for pound MMA style tournament and the sign up for the fight was free, John smiled to himself, the motives behind why the sign up fee was for free was unknown to him but he loved tournaments and even though he did not like to harm people out of unnecessary reasons this would be a good chance for him to train his own combat experience so that ranking up in the council would be easier, see he had heard about people being tested for their ranking up by a knight of a higher rank and so he would need to become stronger to be able to clear those trials.

He would grab the poster and then with a gentle yet fierce motion he ripped it from its holdings and smiled as he folded it together and placed it in his right pocket and then patting the pocket as if it was a pregnant womans stomach.

He made his way back too the hotel where he showered and rested trying his utmost to keep track of the time as he did so, he would dress himself again wearing his dark blue and gold rimmed coat and normal clothing that he most always wore afterall it was his favorite set and it consisted of a white fine shirt with a handkarchief placed in the collar hanging from it making it seem like a real admirals clothing, he also wore dark blue set of Corduroys and ended his clotes set in a pair of gentlemans shoes, none of his clothes were fit for fighting but such a thing did not matter much to him.
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[b][size=18][u]Character Stats[/u][/size][/b]

[b]Health[/b] - 100
[b]Aura[/b] - 100
[b]Usable Aura[/b] - 10
[b]Strength[/b] - 10
[b]Precision[/b] - 10
[b]Resilience[/b] - 10
[b]Speed[/b] - 10

[b][size=18][u]Nen[/u][/size][/b]

[b]Native Nen:[/b] Enhancer
[b]Nen Theme:[/b]  "Storage" - The user is able to store their Aura in a second form of Aura pool for them to use at a later time.
[b]Nen-Points purchased:[/b] 0

[b]Enhancer:[/b] Rank 1
[b]Transmuter:[/b] Rank 0
[b]Conjurer:[/b] Rank 0
[b]Specialist:[/b] Rank 0
[b]Manipulator:[/b] Rank 0
[b]Emitter:[/b] Rank 0

[b][size=18][u]Techniques[/u][/size][/b]

- N/A -

[b][size=18][u]Items[/u][/size][/b]

- N/A -
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